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读后续写难得高分?一篇文章教你写出漂亮的句子!

续写中我们常常需要对人物的情绪进行描写,有喜怒哀惧等等。大部同学都能将这些情绪用英文表达出来,但是却往往描述的太笼统,不够生动形象。

我们来看一个例子。

2018高考浙江卷读后续写:我和爸爸去骑马,结果突然蹦出一只小兔子,马儿受惊迷路,最后父子两人回家的故事。我们来看某位同学描述马儿受惊后的内心表现。

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. The 

horse was terrified and was out of my control. I was very scare-d. But luckily the horse slowed down and I was able to get off. Looking around, I was very confused. I didn’t know where I was.I felt very sad because I was lost.

 

这位同学用了be+adj/feel+adj.句型以及scared/sad/

terrfied 来描述自己内心的恐惧害怕悲伤。虽然也写出了情绪,却不够生动饱满。那么怎样才能让你的描写更加生动呢?

读后续写难得高分?一篇文章教你写出漂亮的句子!


细节描写


一个小建议: 多进行细节描写。思考一下,“我”害怕,害怕到了什么程度?“我”的眼睛怎样,嘴巴怎样,身体怎样? 比较以下句子:

I was scared.

I was so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧,膝盖发软)

I felt very sad.

I felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制,忍不住哭泣)

当我们增加了一些小细节来描述一个人的感受的时候,我们的文章就变得丰满起来,读者读起来也会更有画面感。

读后续写难得高分?一篇文章教你写出漂亮的句子!

情绪表达亮点句


总结续写常用的情绪表达(建议大家背过,写作的时候可以用到)

恐惧


 1) At the sight of the wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees   felt weak. (嗓子发紧,膝盖发软)

2At the sight of the wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.(吓呆了,不敢动弹)

3At the sight of the wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐惧感所控制,手心出汗)

4)I broke   out in a sudden cold sweat.吓得冷汗直流

5)A shiver   runs down my back。 后背一阵寒战。

6)He was   rooted to the spot 吓得钉在地上,动弹不得。

7)In a   split second my heart seemed to leap from my body.心都快跳出来了

悲伤

1Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛,眼泪直流)

1Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉,不能开口说话)

2Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制,忍不住哭泣)

4She sobbed,   hiding her face in her hands.抽泣,用手掩住脸。

5Tears welled   up in her eyes.眼泪涌上它的双眼。

   

喜悦

1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (站到世界顶端,非常开心

2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间)

3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his eyes danced with joy and sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)

4He was wild   with joy欣喜若狂

5He was pleased   beyond description.高兴地无法描述

愤怒

 

1) She felt so angry that she could feel her face burning.(脸上滚烫)

2) So angry was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. (血液涌上脸颊)

3) what he did made my blood boil. 怒火中烧

4) His face was flushed with anger.气得满脸通红


 

在英文写作中我们常说有输入才能有输出,同学们想要写出好的作品,必要的背诵是必不可少的。同时掌握续写的技巧也同样重要。今天我们学习了4种情绪的描写方式,大家学会了吗?


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